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Bleeding for You

August 11, 2011

What is this thing
That's come over me
You're here inside,
Beckoning me.
Around the dead
Bringing sweet life
Flying high on Golden Wings.
Your bleeding heart
Pour onto me
I'll take away
Everything gray.
If you ache,
Sing it to me-
I'll hear your song
I'll start to bleed
Til the sun falls out of the sky,
I'll take your hand,
Heart and your Life


(c)Michael Joseph DeCosta
I really don't want to see this person get hurt...
Even if I wasn't all ooh aaah for them...


Too good of a person...

I'll take away all your pain :)





I wrote this in a cemetery in Salem, MA today...
I love going up there...
The 2 hour drive is kinda lame but hey whatevs
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DigitalStarz Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011
Ooh. I think you're definitely getting more in touch with your inner feeling of darkness and emotion in this deviation, something I like to do. lol :)
And your poetry is still very cool. Keep up the good work. :D
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evanescencesithlord6 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:thanks:
Awe thank you so much!!!!!
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DigitalStarz Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011
Anytime, Mike! :D
When I see talent, I'm happy to add a fav and comment on it.
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evanescencesithlord6 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That's rockin!!!
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DigitalStarz Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
I know, right. :D
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Daft-Enigma Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I see I'm not the only one writing slightly romantic poetry lately!

This is brilliant! Seriously man, this is really, really good!

Your capable of so much emotion, in just a few lines.
That is so cool, it shows you really care.
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evanescencesithlord6 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Fursure!
I guess you can say I've found an infatuation in someone..
i have to call it infatuation right now...
But I love this feeling... The whole constantly
on my mind, make me smile out of no where thing..
I like it XD

thank you so much for noticing :)
And thanks for the :+fav:
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SoulEmbraced383 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, there is a lot of feeling there. That's for sure. I like it.
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evanescencesithlord6 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Definitely is!! :D
Thank you so much for reading,
and for the favorite :)
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SoulEmbraced383 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome :w00t:
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